PopLover6797

I am willing to receive ANY respectful feedback on what you think might be a better cliffhanger or ending, etc,  since I have not GUARANTEED the exact plot yet. Thanks for your time!

PopLover6797

I’m almost done with Chapter 2! By the way Chapter 1 was so short because it was the introduction of the story. Check it out! I’ll probably finish Chapter 2 till the weekend.

poetic_disaster1

@PopLover6797 yeah, like her being in the moment that it happened. Describe how it happened, how did she feel (show the emotions than stating what she felt) 
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PopLover6797

Do u mean like her explaining the way she got hit or something like that?
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