@Do_Not_Touch_Lola could I give you some advice? I know is not really my place as it's your book and everything but from a readers point of view; when you switch pov each chapter, don't go over the same thing twice. For example, in chapters 4 through 5 (New friend) you began with Peters pov and had his account on what happened when he and Jayden met, then the next chapter you had Jayden's account on the exact same scene. "He must've known I was nervous" and "I figured she was nervous" are quite similar and again, from a readers point of view reading the same event now than once is tiring and slows down the pace of the novel. I feel like this could be a great book if given the proper editing and adjustments. Just something to think about in future.
