PotatoXHead97

@XxmagicalmistxX ANSWER YOU CUSTARD!

PotatoXHead97

@XxmagicalmistxX .-.
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XxmagicalmistxX

@PotatoXHead97 -.-
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cantthinkofagood1

You still here sis? I remember you being an OG makeandoffer fan

cantthinkofagood1

@PotatoXHead97 Yeah I miss the days when she was active and showing us her adventures with Jamie lool. Even if she’s stopped writing I wish she’d just let us know tbh
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PotatoXHead97

@cantthinkofagood1 she's been MIA on her insta as well, for even longer, I hope she's okay.
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cantthinkofagood1

@PotatoXHead97 Not a lot lol, just hoping Anna is ok since she’s been MIA for about 2 years now, I think- that’s the longest she’s been gone I’m pretty sure.
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MadamMim99

Hi, you replied to my thread in a club regarding titling my book...
          Did you think that was too much for just a blurb? In the actual story, there are a lot more plot twists than this, so I wanted to try and put some information in the blurb and make it interesting to draw in readers. 
          
          Do you think it would actually have the opposite effect, or would it still attract readers?
          
          I appreciate your feedback. Thank you. 
          
          As for your title suggestions, I think I like "How You Remind Me" the best so far. Thanks for your help. <3 :)

MadamMim99

@PotatoXHead97 I really do appreciate your critiquing. Since this is the first time ever in sharing a story I've written... I actually have no clue in the advertising / attracting readers department haha.
            I would like to see your version, and maybe I can get some ideas on how to improve my summary. 
            Thank you! <3
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PotatoXHead97

@MadamMim99 As I mentioned there, it's truly too long.  To be honest with you, (I am sorry in advance if it offends you in any way) if I wasn't going to help with the title, I would have stopped reading at Danny's description. 
            
            You are keeping away the twists but giving away the plot. Okay, so I would stop rambling and critiquing like an idiot here, I will PM you a version you could compare the original with. 
            
            I am just helping a fellow wattpader, because at the beginning my summary was something similarly long and descriptive. 
            
            I'm glad you liked it, you're welcome.
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