Potatoes-for-life

@SarahPerlmutter I thought it was really great. I think the relationship between Beatrice and Todd went way to fast and lacked details, but over all great story line and like how you started when she was younger and then fast forward through time. Anyway great book thank you for writing it.

SarahPerlmutter

@ajtroche47 Hey there! I made some edits to chapters 13-15 to try to slow their relationship down. I'd love for you to check 'em out (if you have time, of course) to see if it feels slower to you. :-D <3 Thanks again for your feedback!
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SarahPerlmutter

@ajtroche47 Thanks so much for your feedback and for reading it!! :-D
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Potatoes-for-life

@SarahPerlmutter I thought it was really great. I think the relationship between Beatrice and Todd went way to fast and lacked details, but over all great story line and like how you started when she was younger and then fast forward through time. Anyway great book thank you for writing it.

SarahPerlmutter

@ajtroche47 Hey there! I made some edits to chapters 13-15 to try to slow their relationship down. I'd love for you to check 'em out (if you have time, of course) to see if it feels slower to you. :-D <3 Thanks again for your feedback!
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SarahPerlmutter

@ajtroche47 Thanks so much for your feedback and for reading it!! :-D
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