@SarahPerlmutter I thought it was really great. I think the relationship between Beatrice and Todd went way to fast and lacked details, but over all great story line and like how you started when she was younger and then fast forward through time. Anyway great book thank you for writing it.
@ajtroche47 Hey there! I made some edits to chapters 13-15 to try to slow their relationship down. I'd love for you to check 'em out (if you have time, of course) to see if it feels slower to you. :-D <3 Thanks again for your feedback!
@SarahPerlmutter I thought it was really great. I think the relationship between Beatrice and Todd went way to fast and lacked details, but over all great story line and like how you started when she was younger and then fast forward through time. Anyway great book thank you for writing it.
@ajtroche47 Hey there! I made some edits to chapters 13-15 to try to slow their relationship down. I'd love for you to check 'em out (if you have time, of course) to see if it feels slower to you. :-D <3 Thanks again for your feedback!
Hey there @ajtroche47! Thanks so much for adding my book THE BLAST to your reading list! I hope you get a chance to read it and let me know what you think! :-D
-Sarah
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