PragyaRawat

@Unimaginable21  they had her go through some hormonal changes while she wanted a child lol all of this has been explained in immortality actually

Unimaginable21

@PragyaRawat yes I read it thnx :)
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Not_Just_Anonymous

Thanks for following! And lol i cant get over ur location ahhah XD

Not_Just_Anonymous

Thanks! You too :)
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PragyaRawat

@Not_Just_Anonymous also, Merry Christmas !
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PragyaRawat

@Not_Just_Anonymous I'll make sure to check it out then.
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EnglishBreakfastGirl

Thanks so much for following! Please check out my books and let me know how you feel. I'm happy to do the same, just ask xx

PragyaRawat

@EnglishBreakfastGirl oh ok then, I'm only more excited about the new year now xD 
            Best of luck for it 
            
            Cheers 
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EnglishBreakfastGirl

@PragyaRawat no that's perfect! Royal lies isn't my main novel and I think I've pushed it back a little. I've been meaning to edit for a while now and I will definitely go over everything asap. In the new year everything is going to be updated weekly so hopefully I can give you more then! 
            Any help is welcome and I thank you so much for letting me know what you thought xx cheers
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PragyaRawat

@EnglishBreakfastGirl  so i started reading Royal Lies and so here is my promised feedback : 
            First of all i would like to congratulate you for having a very engaging introduction. You have a very promising premise and i hope a strong plot since not much has been revealed yet, so i cant really say much as of now. 
            Another very important thing that i would like you to first of all go over are the typos. Typos are really annoying, they break the flow of the reader and annoy us. I'm not particularly, going to point out typos but I'd suggest you go over what you have typed once before publishing it or ask someone to do so. 
            
            Another thing that didn't go very well with me in it was the pacing of your story. Its almost too fast for me. But i guess that depends from reader to reader and doesn't really matter a lot. Other than that, great job till what I've read and i hope you'll be updating soon! 
            
            (Hope i don't sound like a annoying old person who has got nothing to do but point out others mistakes. I swear i didn't mean to give anything but constructive criticism)  
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