@EnglishBreakfastGirl so i started reading Royal Lies and so here is my promised feedback :
First of all i would like to congratulate you for having a very engaging introduction. You have a very promising premise and i hope a strong plot since not much has been revealed yet, so i cant really say much as of now.
Another very important thing that i would like you to first of all go over are the typos. Typos are really annoying, they break the flow of the reader and annoy us. I'm not particularly, going to point out typos but I'd suggest you go over what you have typed once before publishing it or ask someone to do so.
Another thing that didn't go very well with me in it was the pacing of your story. Its almost too fast for me. But i guess that depends from reader to reader and doesn't really matter a lot. Other than that, great job till what I've read and i hope you'll be updating soon!
(Hope i don't sound like a annoying old person who has got nothing to do but point out others mistakes. I swear i didn't mean to give anything but constructive criticism)