PrinceGavriel

@burpleberry  I was dead for a long time -_- hopefully I can update idk how long it will last, I sincerely apologize.

rain_water

Oh! I missed a few updates of Delwon, totally back on my to read list ;) I stopped by your page just to say that I kind of notice the differing levels of editing?? I see that I kind of said that already 3 months ago on your page. I can't believe I was the last one to comment so long ago! *shrugs* I like your stories, some of your concepts are very interesting and original. IMHO if you had consistent editing they would be way better. It seems like you edit sometimes, but the level can vary drastically from page to page almost. Just a thought. I am glad you updated Delwon.
          Rain

rain_water

DUDE!!!! You wrote a sequel to Hall like oh my gosh!!! I came to your page to harass you about Delwon, and this what I find?!?! I still want an update for Delwon, PLEASE. I guess I can read this sequel too;)
          
          
          Rain
          
          
          p.s. I read my previous commentary on Delwon and I said "professional quality," so you know I like you. But, my brief review of your new stuff, I notice you need to spellcheck (said w/ love).