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If your not busy kindly read this story of mine entitled 'The Story Of Us' this was formerly as 'Brief Encointer'...  Your comments/feedbacks  about my story are highly appreciated. Help me improve my writings, and let's support each other.  Salamat! ^_^
          
          Title: The story of us
          Genre: Romance/Drama 
          Description: 
          The story of a girl named Mina having a vacation in her grandma's house but ended up being lost in the forest and there she meets a guy named Gino.
          
          -> https://my.w.tt/zBuaN9fm5Y