joefferMendoza
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ONE IN A MILLION COMMENTS :)
( A little appreciation to the Author ) Part 1
A Big applause to the man behind this Beautiful masterpiece, Beautiful art and works. Bebe Z, this story is mind-blowing! One in a million perfect stories that I have read so far, This book tells a perfect scenario for the future. Dinala mo ako sa mundo ng Realidad. I actually critique every story that i read and fuck! I don't leave any comments if hindi ito naging pasok sa Standard ko. What caught my interest is that on how you done the story with the ¹Clear Outline plotting for every chapter to chapter, I love the way on how you combined those elements and sceneries from the flow of Plot twist and to the whole theme of story, hindi sya minadali at halatang pinag isipan ng maigi. ²Putting every scenario with the clear details and ideas that readers can relate to what the Heart of story tells. And ³Using a Fabula chronological technique that makes the stories more rational and makes sense at the end. Dito ako lalong mas humanga because using Fabula and Plot twist at the same time is very tricky, dapat alam mo ang isusunod na flow at wala kang dapat ma miss na important structure sa nauna mong nagawang input. The strategies you use in creating this Story are the hardest one, and the styles you used are the secret technique that makes the story end satisfying wherein some authors forget to apply it on their own and that's make them think parang may kulang sa works nila.
