PrincessButtercup

Hey people what do you think about the title of my story?

Shelley2594

hey you.......yes you looking at screen 
          
          im kinda a newbe it would mean alot to me if you could take a look at my story, i know that they arent grate cuz i just started writing....... 
          
          see if you could tell me what you REALLY think like what im good at and what i need work on that would help SO much....... 
          
          because all the people that have read it say like 'good work' or 'keep going' but that dont help me get better so i would be really thankful if you did this... 
          
          michelle

Aetila

Hey there! 
          I'm new to Watt pad, and I was wondering if yo u could read one of my stories and comment on it! (voting, f anning, and whatever are all o ptional, its the reviews I nee d!) I'd love to return the fav or, and I will! 
          I know this mig ht annoy you, but anything is greatly appreciated! Thanks fo r reading this! 
          -Celeste 
          My Stories--Gol den Dawn; Karis Gebelin was ju st your typical Hawaii transpl ant to Manhattan, obsessive to p student who actually procras tinates everything, and bound of Ivy; future careerist and c urrent fortune teller. Until-- that is--she finds out everyth ing she aced is more or less a ben trevato--so goodbye model student and striving socialit e--and hello demonslayer/alche mist and automatic industry ty coon--that is, if she survives. 
          
          Elven Mob Bosse s and Rebel Heirs--Welcome to a world where elves,well, aren 't your fairy tale elves. Rule d in a ochlocracy, of Oligarch s and tech savvy megacorporati ons, of underworld criminal ru le, resistance in this mobocra cy is futile when your King ca n be your dishwasher in one da y. Intergalactic bestseller an d future Oligarch, Kronos fød t av Mørke’skala soon finds out how his fickle world migh t change--with his help too.

lovatic_

hey. 
          i was just wondering if u could take a look at my new story, Harewood crescent? it's about this girl who loves music and she goes on this music trip and falls in love with a guy called steve.But when tradgedy strikes she doesnt know if she really can fall in love with angel.... 
          so pleaz vote...comment? maybe become a fan??? 
          its only the first six chapters bt all my friends love it and say its really good. 
          i know these can get annoying bt its the only way i can get peeps to read it. These things dont stay on the whats new page for any long. thanks, Amy (: 

Aetila

Hey there! 
          I'm new to Watt pad, and I was wondering if yo u could read one of my stories  and comment on it! (voting, f anning, and whatever are all o ptional, its the reviews I nee­d!) I'd love to return the fav or, and I will! 
          I know this mig ht annoy you, but anything is greatly appreciated! Thanks fo r reading this! 
          -Celeste 
          My Stories--Gol den Dawn; Karis Gebelin was ju st your typical Hawaii transpl ant to Manhattan, obsessive to p student who actually procras tinates everything, and bound of Ivy; future careerist and c urrent fortune teller. Until-- that is--she finds out everyth ing she aced is more or less a  ben trevato--so goodbye model  student and striving socialit e--and hello demonslayer/alche mist and automatic industry ty coon--that is, if she survives. 
          
          Elven Mob Bosse s and Rebel Heirs--Welcome to a world where elves,well, aren 't your fairy tale elves. Rule d in a ochlocracy, of Oligarch s and tech savvy megacorporati ons, of underworld criminal ru le, resistance in this mobocra cy is futile when your King ca n be your dishwasher in one da y. Intergalactic bestseller an d future Oligarch, Kronos fød t av Mørke’skala soon finds  out how his fickle world migh t change--with his help too.