CarolLinee7
Love your story but here is some advice. When you have people talk make it a different paragraph and dont always use the word said. Use words like scream or explained or questioned. Other then that love the nalu moments!! ❤❤
PrincessSakura79
@CarolLinee7 thank you if there is any thing elsa you want to tell me because I love when you give feed back and what I can do to make it better
