Thank you again for your comments. That huge paragraph chapter nearly killed me. I typically write with a lesson in mind, but that particular chapter's lesson eluded me until the end of the chapter when I took all of the paragraph spacing out of it. And of course, I wanted to gauge my eyes out after it. I do like that the chapter lets everyone know the importance of paragraphing...and I've had a number of 13-year-olds tell me that until seeing that chapter, they never really understood the reasoning behind paragraphs.
Thanks again!