Hey I saw your critique add and I hope you will be willing to give my your honest opinion on my story. It is called unfortunate circumstances and I haven't wrote a summary but it's under horror,mystery, thriller and romance. Hope you can do it. Thanks x
http://www.wattpad.com/55419341-unfortunate-circumstances
I'm done! Give me a while to read your other chapters. I'll read them once I'm free^^ First chapter wasn't clear enough so I'll have to read the other chapters.