Snow_bp
I read your story. I'm glad you're trying to write. There are a few things that need improvement. If you'd like. I can help you...I don't mean it in a bad way. You're young and it's great that you're writing. Let me give you a hand and I think your story would be great. You have my support.
Snow_bp
@ PritiKumari305 You're already 17...when we started writing, you were 16. Okay, that doesn't matter, you've definitely been in love with someone, right? You love BP. That's enough to give you an idea. Just try to describe it more. Try to find a nice comic, one nice page, and try to describe it in as many words as possible. That helped me.
PritiKumari305
@Snow_bp more than i dont even know how it feels when we fell in love at first sight or i am 17 already and i dont even have a single crush while my friends younger than me she have relationship exprience . i think thats why my character feels lifeless
Snow_bp
@ Snow_bp You don't have to be sad at all. You can rewrite all the chapters. The story can be hidden and re-transported. I did that too. My first story has many mistakes. I had to edit it too. It's a process. It describes more feelings. When Boun saw Prem for the first time...I want to feel the feelings as a reader. How his heart jumped, the earth trembled...the thing is that you are very young and you are writing BL...that's not exactly usual. You also don't have much experience...so you can't describe the world that much, because the world is still waiting to meet you. But don't lose hope. I'm standing here and I'll help you if you need it.
