Piyush

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You are welcome Aashu bhaiya...your writing is interesting

You are welcome.. The story is interesting :)

@BluePrincess_Hali :)

@Vidhi1989  impatience...

@Vidhi1989 this chapter includes simple conversations....may be you had planned somthing else as climax....title of the chapter 'Bichadne ki raat'  sounds somthing  sad
            All total it made me think about the Next...!!!

@Vidhi1989 thanks... but tumhe chapter kaisa laga? I mean story development?

@Vidhi1989 allright....:)

@Vidhi1989 Btw.. its 'without love', not 'with love'..

@Vidhi1989 yes it is the complex one... you will have to wait for things to mug up and fully understand.. but the topic is complex also.. I wanted it to be discreet and emphasized less with my explnatn and wanted it to be more subtle and more direct to readers. Its up to readers to understand cause these are difficult realities and I don't want to present any biased characterisation.. and as far as character's identity, you will know eventually.. It is somewhat dark and difficult but not impossible to comphrnd.. I told u already, may be u might not like the story.. each and every creation of mine is different, so not everyone is likeable..

I'm glad you like it sir :)
            Yes many suffer silently, even though they don't  need to be silent, their inner fear made them remain silent :)

@KanchanMehta "hii ma'am...i liked this story as it deeply touched me. It made me to think about the peoples who suffers everything Silently..." 

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