DebraHeston

You said that you have been writing since you were little. How old are you now? 
          
          So far your plot isn't too bad, I have used genre stereotypes and old ideas too. It is how you bring your own twist to an old story that matters. 
          
          Some of your writing is weak, I admit. Practice and reading above your grade level will help. 
          
          I wish you luck. Keep it up! 

ProTy0

@DebraHeston Thank you, I will edit my book so that it can be written well and stronger.
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