@Pro_gamzer
Hello so i have got few ideas for my new luUta story but I won't be able give any update or upload it since my exams are coming and thanks for all of the support and today somehow my story is 1st rank in uta but it won't be there for long so thanks again for helping me to get my story on top i will let you all know when i gonna to start working on my new story
So today is gonna to be the last chapter of this series and all the credits of this story goes to icyiclo he was the one who inspired me and with that I end this story
Finally my mind came back from vacation the new chapter is out so go and check it
So i am running out idea and i need some suggestions on what the next chapter should be
Thankyou for the tips i will make sure to improve my story
I would like to help you make your story better if you want me too I can give you some advice on here
Some if the first things I would recomend is to put "" arond sentences when a cheriacter is talking so readers can distinguish when a cheriacter is talking or not. The next thing I recomend tell us whitch person is talking. The last thing I recomend is if you do P.O.Vs (point of view) in futer chapters use words to form a first person P.O.V like I.
