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Hey hey! ♡
          
          I'm excited to announce the publishing of my new and original story Vivarium! A supernatural/fantasy/romance/young adult novel!
          
          Aiming to have one new chapter released by every Sunday NZDT unless notified otherwise.
          
          Please note the trigger warnings in the preface, and don't be afraid to offer feedback. :)
          
          Synopsis:
          
          "It was fine. Absolutely fine for a while.
          
          Vera Antonova, the last remaining daughter of two wealthy Russian parents has a secret. Something so ridiculously extreme that she can't understand how it's been kept for so long, if it has at all. As if they couldn't sniff out the dog at their dining table.
          
          Solitary confinement was a situation that warranted every last crumb of patience, of which she felt slip past the gaps of her fingers like sand. What made it complicated was her father, Viktor Antonov, someone who was far more sinister than a simple control freak.
          
          Between discovering her mate and seeking the taste of freedom, she finds herself in a violent and sadistic everlasting game of cat-and-mouse. Peace holds a price that she's not sure she can pay, but may not have a choice."
          
          Love y'all!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/367819250-vivarium

Kia ora!
          
          I'm happy to announce that I have a new project up and running! ♡
          
          A close friend and I have been working on this story for well beyond six months now, with plenty of content to share, and we're wanting to get our little world out there. This has been written by two people, not just myself.
          
          Aiming to update this story once or twice per week - what my work schedule can permit.
          
          Very open to feedback! 
          
          "Her best friend and trusted dealer is moving out of town, he refers her to a noteworthy dealer he knows of. Tasia Hayes and Este Belyakov find themselves tangled together within an unhealthy spiral of complicated feelings, soon facing the inevitable. Addiction, grief and festering trauma cause two unprepared worlds to collide."
          
          Please be aware of heavier, triggering themes listed in the introduction. Reader's discretion advised.
          
          Love y'all
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/361900722

May 5th 2013...
          That was a long time ago. About six years ago in fact. 
          That was the date you completed Take Me With You. 
          You also said that there was going to be a sequel...
          I don't want to sound mean or rude or anything but I would love to know when you are going to post the sequel. I think that others have given up and believe that you are no longer updating ever again (or something to that effect) because the latest message on your profile was @Wolfpack1824 asking when you were going to upload that story, two years ago. I'm just saying that it'd be really nice to know if we are ever going to get a sequel or not. You just kinda... vanished.

Your writing isn't bad, you still need to work sticking to the one tense and the pace of your story's but otherwise you are doing well. :)

Seeing as you are writing a horror, have a look at this: http://www.wattpad.com/7374787-how-to-write-a-great-horror-story-you-are-a-writer It may actually help. Check out the whole thing, not just the one chapter. :)