Thank you for reminding us again that this is your first ever book. I think as Readers we sometimes get so immersed in what we are reading that we forget what we were initially informed of and judge from our maybe long reading experience. I will say, your writing is very good. However, it could be improved. For example, some of it comes across as very formulaic. Other parts are cliche. The chemistry between our current two main characters are very on point. Your intimate/erotic scenes are very well done. I think the story needs more depth and we need to see more of Arabh and Shreya’s interaction for it to be more believable. Right now, at times, I feel like I am at a distance; watching a show being put on rather than being IN the show, one with the characters. ( That last part is probably confusing, I apologize if so.) Anywho, I promise to keep reading and will try to do a better job commenting. If you like, I will start all over reading and comment. Some will be to you, some will be to the characters. I find when I comment to the author, it is usually because something written has thrown me out of my immersion in the story. Just let me know what you would like for me to do. Thanks.
