Prometeus67

Hello, readers! This Is an important message. So Please ready this. The One Piece story Vice Captain of the Straw Hats has been officially discontinude. So I Appreciate that some of you still read It, but I won't continue that story. I Just wanted to tell you this. 

GABRIELEFR6

@ Prometeus67  why? I might ask im not lot of that but I saw big potential 
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WendyDougherty

Let’s connect and talk more.
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SwishH

It won't let me reply for some reason so I'll paste my comment
          
          please do! if you want i can give you his current lore as i have no problem with him being used at all, and I think this idea is really cool!

SwishH

@Prometeus67 of course, do you have TikTok or discord?
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Prometeus67

@ SwishH  Really?! Thank you! 
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DrakeDemon68

would they be able to learn more moves? Moves out of more unique and unexpected. Like for luffy; I could see him getting a power up that’s sort of like spicy lady from JJBA. Was him making things as soft as a bouncy ball but so strong that it can’t be pierced through. 

DrakeDemon68

If you noticed that don’t know characters in the series that can actually Weaponized sound. I mean we seen a character that can silence everything around him and we’ve seen someone out a supersonic shriek from haki. But we’ve never seen a devil food that could turn sound into a weapon. We’ve seen Brook use music to suck someone soul and create illusions. But we never seen someone use the sound inside of a person‘s body to take them down and we’ve never seen someone use sound the way some character in different animes use it. Have you ever noticed that?
          
          In JJBA, koichi with his stand reverb use words of sound effects they turned the sound inside of a person into a weapon and later it was upgraded so that it can place sound effects on physical objects, and once someone makes contact with it, the effect comes to life. 
          
          In Mashle: magic and muscles, we see a character called macaron turn sound into a physical shape to take down his enemies. He can even travel through sound waves to get to where he needs to go in an instant. Making him want the fastest characters around.
          
          In Toriko, Zebra is capable of massive destruction, he uses a "Sound Wall" to block smell and sound from traveling. He also uses sound waves to create a map of his environment down to the millimeter, tracking heartbeats over miles.

DrakeDemon68

I have a character that could be good for your stories. From fairy tail to Black Clover to one piece. It’s this character I’ve seen from the story I read called Archmage curriculum. The character I’m talking about is the main character of the story. He can mold mix and morph anything his palms make contact with. It can affect people and surroundings. You can use it to heal and to attack and to defend changing himself and everything around him. Making it, however, he wants it to be. Just go to Atsumaru or Manga Man website and/or app and type in “Archmage curriculum” and you’ll see what I mean. Despite his appearance, he’s actually a very nice guy. He’s so dangerous that people automatically assume that he’s evil on enemy and attack him on the spot. It’s like he’s molding and mixing everything that’s in his grasp.

DrakeDemon68

Got to say man your stories are unique and new. But you need to make them better like putting in more narrative into the story instead of just dialogue from the characters. It needs to have something more. 
          
          Here is a story of what I’m talking about. It’s called the legend of fairy Machina on FanFiction.Net 
          

DuskyNote8833

Hey there @Prometeus67 I was just wondering if Naruto will know who Cana’s father is and if he knows and is also dating Cana before the S class trials make him a little scared of Guildarts. And Guildarts finds out that Cana is his daughter make him chase Naruto around the island

Prometeus67

@ DuskyNote8833  Oh, you gave me a nice idea. 
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