Prometeus67

Hello, readers! This Is an important message. So Please ready this. The One Piece story Vice Captain of the Straw Hats has been officially discontinude. So I Appreciate that some of you still read It, but I won't continue that story. I Just wanted to tell you this. 

GABRIELEFR6

@ Prometeus67  why? I might ask im not lot of that but I saw big potential 
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WendyDougherty

Let’s connect and talk more.
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DrakeDemon68

When you do a mato story, maybe the next one should have a all male squad where they don’t trust or like the corps because their view on men. 
          
          The squad and corps have stuff in common but the guys don’t trust and hate the girls and are strong and skilled enough to rival the strongest female. I’m thinking the squad should be like the jojo stardust crusaders and golden wind. With the girls themselves not knowing about them until they made a appearance.  Because of what the girls did to the guys, they form their own squad against the monster and the girls. 
          
          What do you think of my idea for your next Mato chained slave? Please send me a response of what you think.

DrakeDemon68

I like the ideas of your story, but there are flaws to them; like sometimes the grammar is wrong and the stories themselves don’t feel like I’m reading a story, it feels like more of a script from a movie or something. 
          
          It doesn’t even go into great general detail or depth into what’s going on in the story. I want to feel like I’m reading a book than a script from a movie. I do like the images you put in your stories but I want the text to give me more to allow me to see clearly what’s going on. 
          
          And sometimes the regular text mixes with what the characters say as dialogue. If you can fix these problems, you’ll get more people interested in your stories. I’m not talking bad about you, I just think these will help you improve your stories. If you want to know what I’m talking about, you can read this story from fanfiction.net called the legend of fairy machina. You’ll get the idea. 

DrakeDemon68

You know, you’re good at putting in characters of your very own for stories and adding to the storyline with the canon. 
          
          But I feel like your stories are missing a certain image for what they’re being described. 
          
          Your stories seem right, but they’re missing something; the imagery that lets a person picture and imagine what’s going on. No offense, but some of your stories feel like reading a script instead of a book.

DuskyNote8833

Hey there I just had an idea how about the group in fairy Tail goes to Asta home town after destroying Lullaby.

DuskyNote8833

@Prometeus67 Glad to help you, and when you reply to a message, please don't put a space in between the "@ " and the username, because I don't receive a notification of your reply
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Prometeus67

@ DuskyNote8833  That could be a good thing. You gave me a good idea. Thank you. 
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Prometeus67

Hello, readers! This Is an important message. So Please ready this. The One Piece story Vice Captain of the Straw Hats has been officially discontinude. So I Appreciate that some of you still read It, but I won't continue that story. I Just wanted to tell you this. 

GABRIELEFR6

@ Prometeus67  why? I might ask im not lot of that but I saw big potential 
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WendyDougherty

Let’s connect and talk more.
            Dc: elisemartin12
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MariusB05

Can I suggest a future story?

MariusB05

Gachiakuta Cthoni or Riyo x Male reader 
            Witch Hat Atelier x Male demon boy reader 
            Delicious in Dungeon x Male reader (half orc/human hybrid)
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Prometeus67

@ MariusB05  Sure. Let's Hear It 
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