I like the ideas of your story, but there are flaws to them; like sometimes the grammar is wrong and the stories themselves don’t feel like I’m reading a story, it feels like more of a script from a movie or something.
It doesn’t even go into great general detail or depth into what’s going on in the story. I want to feel like I’m reading a book than a script from a movie. I do like the images you put in your stories but I want the text to give me more to allow me to see clearly what’s going on.
And sometimes the regular text mixes with what the characters say as dialogue. If you can fix these problems, you’ll get more people interested in your stories. I’m not talking bad about you, I just think these will help you improve your stories. If you want to know what I’m talking about, you can read this story from fanfiction.net called the legend of fairy machina. You’ll get the idea.