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@Kelioiss No problem :)

Frankdale

Hello there again. I really appreciate  your feedback from my last story and I have started my new one. The issue I'm working on is my prelude. It is a little bit different from a standard prelude and I'm not sure if it will work as intended. I am well into chapter 3 and would like to post what i have if the prelude will work. If not, then I will write up a new one before i post. Here is my prelude. http://www.wattpad.com/6124175-life-for-sale-an-inhumane-crime-prelude?d=ud

Frankdale

Hi :)   I have begun reposting my story chap by chap as per advice from my comments to me. I appreciate any insight. Good or bad. This story is basically just going up but I will be using advice and critism for my newest one I am working on to improve my style. (hopefully)  ps, I do use the tips given by readers
          Thanks
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/2150494-samanthas-cove