Bro,I have an idea for your next chapter,which can potentially make it more enjoyable,and its simple - really,all you need to do is to show a fex scenes and events Im going to mention that you'll make them react first before the number one revealed as "events from another universe" to make them find out gist of kiyotaka's past and his abilities,so lets get down to it...firstly,you need to place the scenes I mention in a calculated place,and these are 1) in u2 vol.4.5,there's a scene that yagami and amasawa had talk in cruise ship,about wether amasawa will stay neutral or side with kiyotaka compeletely,and this happened after island exam...2)scene - actually,this is not exactly scene,its monologue - monologue of yagami takuya from y2volume2,and you should post all of the scenes and this monologue compeletely,no cuts.. 3)scene - in y2v7,when amasawa tries to corner kushida,kiyotaka comes and saves her from amasawa,and this scene should also be completely written(no info hiding - no need to hide wr,I mean)and last 4)scene but not least,its the expulsion of yagami takuya,this scene can clearly shows the people the difference between n1 and n2 to,and Im sure you dont forget to mention that yagami from cannon and yagami from your fic are compeletely different,atleast in personality,if not in abilites,too...and after all that scenes that were shown,your "audience" will ask 'johan' about the stats of kiyotaka,that's when you show them.....I would be really happy if you posted in that way I mentioned,and Im sure much of your reading audience too,so....take your time,and write as much as you want....
