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Man,that was a good chapter,I give you that - tho I wonder,what did you mean when you talked about delving deeper into kiyotaka's origins? tell me,does that mean in the next chapter,you'll show only volume 0 scenes? or will you show a past similar to volume 0 - white room,yes,but - different scenes than canon? atleast answer my this question,to be more precise- what exactly will you show next time,so we readers better ready ourselves for something we knew so we better not be dissappointed,I mean....today's chapter was honeslty good,disbeliefs,fears,breakings of composure many times - expected,but not in an detailed-exact way...so - I wanna now,what exactly will you show in the next chapter as "origins of ayanokoji kiyotaka" - canon scenes from only volume 0(which I prefer to be shown only rather than showing some child-play cheap scenes from anhs arc...),or highlighted scenes from anhs years also,or something entirely different - an origin that also includes white room,yes - but different scenes compeletely - like new fighting scenes,events that happened in the world of politics that includes or are about ayanokoji atsuomi or his son - kiyotaka,and kiyotaka's interactions with others - instructors,and his fellow "classmates" - like yuki,to be more exact....so,could you tell me?

One thing you could do to reveal Ayanokouji is to show his first dialogue, the one about human equality; I think that would be better than just throwing out his stats.

Vroooo I want drugs....I mean chapter 7.

Hey hey hey...I told you didnt I? you should show stats after making them react canon universe ao they'll find out who's n1,but dont know his stats,but through reaction to scenes one after another just like the script I wrote,they'll understand the big difference between kiyotaka and other wr students,so in the somewhat near the end of the show you'll show them his stats...I have a question though,you said you'll make them react to canon after stats,if you do that,does that mean they'll react to scenes and stats in seperated chapters?

Well,Im glad that you'ce already written some of them,buy.....do you really have to brag 'bout it every f*cking single time?dont get me wrong just joking,cuz noone before bragged 'bout it ...

New chapter when? 

Also add ishigami class 1A rank whose intellectual ability is same as ichika but physical ability same as Sakura.
          It will be interesting 

Regarding my idea about next chapter,if you were to write in the way I mentioned,I must also say that all the things I mentioned must happened in a SINGLE chapter at all costs...cuz people dont like when you left them waiting,but one thing is for sure - this chapter will be one of the longest one so far,and probably the most enjoyable too,in my opinion atleast...Im not sure it can bring you more reading in numbers,but Im sure it'd be more fun and enjoyable than other chapters....I hope you accept my idea,take your time,and see ya next time!!

Bro,I have an idea for your next chapter,which can potentially make it more enjoyable,and its simple - really,all you need to do is to show a fex scenes and events Im going to mention that you'll make them react first before the number one revealed as "events from another universe" to make them find out gist of kiyotaka's past and his abilities,so lets get down to it...firstly,you need to place the scenes I mention in a calculated place,and these are 1) in u2 vol.4.5,there's a scene that yagami and amasawa had talk in cruise ship,about wether amasawa will stay neutral or side with kiyotaka compeletely,and this happened after island exam...2)scene - actually,this is not exactly scene,its monologue - monologue of yagami takuya from y2volume2,and you should post all of the scenes and this monologue compeletely,no cuts.. 3)scene - in y2v7,when amasawa tries to corner kushida,kiyotaka comes and saves her from amasawa,and this scene should also be completely written(no info hiding - no need to hide wr,I mean)and last 4)scene but not least,its the expulsion of yagami takuya,this scene can clearly shows the people the difference between n1 and n2 to,and Im sure you dont forget to mention that yagami from cannon and yagami from your fic are compeletely different,atleast in personality,if not in abilites,too...and after all that scenes that were shown,your "audience" will ask 'johan' about the stats of kiyotaka,that's when you show them.....I would be really happy if you posted in that way I mentioned,and Im sure much of your reading audience too,so....take your time,and write as much as you want....