Pseudonym0609

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          	My first ever novel
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/335845460

Pseudonym0609

I am new to writing so can you please read my stories and tell me about my mistakes and how should I correct them. 
          Please. Hope you give your honest reviews and suggest solutions to the problems if any.
          These will be short stories for people llike3 me who like to read but not long and huge stories. I will be submitting you a content in which there will the same type of content which is there in long stories but the stories are short or average. 
          
                                        Thank-you