Callum

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Hey everyone I just need a little bit of help with my "Legend of Spyro: The Abyss". It's just a small favour I ask, but do you think you can give me more ideas for the story because I want to make this story very fulfilling not just for me, but also for you and everyone else.
          
          I also want to make this story one of the best spyro stories in it's category and for that I can't do this alone. So, I ask if you can help me reach this goal by giving me some ideas and feedback on the story.
          
          I can't wait to hear from everyone. I'll see you guys in the comments and if you want to speak to me privately, message me. See ya all!!♡

Well i actually unpublished it, i still have the whole thing. Some weird stuff was going on when i read it online to see how others can see it. Did it show lines that were repeated and lots of chunks were missing?

I was about to vote on your story and then it said you deleted it. Why tho? It was really good!!