Arlette G

@Tin_Can  you don't like Pizza.!!!

for 20   things about me

hey got nominated by @tin_can

@Tin_Can Thanks for not murdering me. I was mostly thinking of Evil Laughs at the time.

Okay, I'm young to give you some criticism, please don't be offended...
          
          But your stories are telling, not showing.
          Sometimes, the descriptions are, "it was a room." and then "The room was cold. There was a rug." as afterthoughts. The lack of description and grammar make it really hard for me to read anything you write.

@venecia_gomez Lol thanks

Love your stories 

Thanks for following! :)

@marlynpurple5 No problem 
          

Hi Arletteghiguera thanks for following! !!