Psychotic Sinner

So I just started my first book if anyone could give it a read I would really appreciate it 

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HeLlO!

So I have to write a scary story for my English class and it is due soon and I could really use some help with it so I made a book that contains everything that I currently have so if anyone can look at it and give me some tips I would really appreciate it 

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