laviduskwood
Sorry to say but... U shouldn't have add MC having Super natural powers in this story .. I mean idk the storyline.. u must hve planned something good... But Natural natural powers seems unrealistic... Hope u don't take it in a negative emway
RandomUserNameLo
@PallaviShinde541 Btw I get your point but I don't mind it cause it makes the story more interesting.
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Psycho_Asher
@PallaviShinde541 Well I thought that almost everyone are writing the same "Jake and MC" love story and I wanted to write something different, then this idea came to me. However presently MC don't have any powers. But will she get it back or not, you have to know in upcoming chapters And one more thing I'll never think my commenters comments as negative. I'll always respect them I'm happy that you said your opinion ☺️✨
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