Hi! I just found your story [Knotted Hearts II] and I’m loving the vibe! I especially like how you mix Hindi dialogues with the English narrative—it makes the characters feel so real.
I’m a student editor (BetabyDeb) and I specialize in editing Indian-style stories. I noticed that sometimes the switch between English and Hindi grammar gets a little tricky in the narration.
Since I understand both languages, I can polish the English grammar without messing up your Hindi dialogues (something Grammarly can't do!).I’d love to beta read your next chapter for free (as a sample) to show you how I work. Let me know if you're interested! ✨"
