The Visitor is very good! I can't wait for another chapter! Very well written. I noticed a few errors with spelling and grammar, but even the greatest writers make mistakes. Keep going and don't mind the haters, there will always be people who won't like your creations. Focus on the people that do like your creations, and use that for motivation. I struggle with motivation, and harsh comments and thoughts about my stories which always put me down. Keep going, the feeling of finishing a story is an amazing feeling!!