Pumpilu

Hello there!
          
          Sorry for disturbing, but can you please read my story? Thank you ❤️

Hai kak.. salam kenal..
          aku lagi belajar bikin cerita nih kak, boleh minta masukannya? kalau berkenan ditunggu kritik dan sarannya ya kak :)
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/205699348