Hey. I love your book so far. I would highly encourage you to continue, as it seems you're extremely talented. There are a few mistakes, nothing a little editing won't fix. You could get a friend, your mom, heck even me to look over it and edit spelling and grammatical mistakes. Let me know if you want any help. I tend to read the books with less reads, and they are such amazing storylines, but people give up if they do not have enough views. But the secret is, the more written the more likely someone will read it. Its a known fact. ;) Anyways, let me know if you need anything, good story here so far. :) Hope you upload soon! (And sorry for any mistakes I am on my touch phone...its terrible for typing)
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