PunsandPancakes

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          	- They come back to school, more powerful then ever, ready to face Sunset. However, when they get back, they discover no one at the school knows Celestia exists. A new headmaster has her place: Discord. 
          	
          	- Discord apparently having Sunset Shimmer under his thumb: he is the true mastermind. Sunset, this semester is also more conflicted internally. She eventually turns on Discord and sides with the Main 6. 
          	
          	- The girls all use their magic to eventually defeat him in a big final showdown. (I was going to use parallels to the Daring Do pages I wrote earlier)
          	
          	- Cutie marks are returned and so is everyone's memories of magic. Twilight has best friends for life and eventually reconnects with her brother. 
          	
          	Shipsss.....
          	
          	- Pinkie Pie and Cheese Sandwich were definitely going to be a thing.
          	
          	- I was going to make Fluttershy and Rainbow date, but then break up amicably when Fluttershy realizes Rainbow is just dating her because of her loyalty of their bond since childhood. Fluttershy lets go of Rainbow once and for all and embraces their friendship  (butttttttt ommggg I literally thought out a sequel years later where Rainbow has a kid with Soarin, but breaks it off and returns Fluttershy. It was so dramatic I cry thinking about it)
          	
          	- Flash and Twilight was going to be a thing too. (You find out Flash was under a spell from Sunset about the whole cheating thing- he was never with Sunset while he was pursuing Twilight. Flash and Twi reconciled and started dated by the end.)
          	
          	So yeah. There are your answers! Thank you for letting me entertain you all those years ago. Peace out.

PunsandPancakes

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          - They come back to school, more powerful then ever, ready to face Sunset. However, when they get back, they discover no one at the school knows Celestia exists. A new headmaster has her place: Discord. 
          
          - Discord apparently having Sunset Shimmer under his thumb: he is the true mastermind. Sunset, this semester is also more conflicted internally. She eventually turns on Discord and sides with the Main 6. 
          
          - The girls all use their magic to eventually defeat him in a big final showdown. (I was going to use parallels to the Daring Do pages I wrote earlier)
          
          - Cutie marks are returned and so is everyone's memories of magic. Twilight has best friends for life and eventually reconnects with her brother. 
          
          Shipsss.....
          
          - Pinkie Pie and Cheese Sandwich were definitely going to be a thing.
          
          - I was going to make Fluttershy and Rainbow date, but then break up amicably when Fluttershy realizes Rainbow is just dating her because of her loyalty of their bond since childhood. Fluttershy lets go of Rainbow once and for all and embraces their friendship  (butttttttt ommggg I literally thought out a sequel years later where Rainbow has a kid with Soarin, but breaks it off and returns Fluttershy. It was so dramatic I cry thinking about it)
          
          - Flash and Twilight was going to be a thing too. (You find out Flash was under a spell from Sunset about the whole cheating thing- he was never with Sunset while he was pursuing Twilight. Flash and Twi reconciled and started dated by the end.)
          
          So yeah. There are your answers! Thank you for letting me entertain you all those years ago. Peace out.

PunsandPancakes

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          - Twilight finds the cutie mark gems from Sunset. She discovers that Spike is a Dragoni when he starts to exhibits strange behavior when he's near the gems.  He's ashamed of it but she comforts him. The gems then exhibit ~magic~
          
          - Twilight discovers that the cutie mark gems are connected to everyone her friends somehow. These gems can control their minds, actions, and abilities. She realizes that Sunset must have used the cutie mark gem against Rarity, making her sick. Twi heals Rarity, and restores her memory
          
          - Hearth's break happens. Twi stays with Pinkie in Pony Villa to that they can go visit Luna at the aslyum. 
          
          - When they visit, Luna says that she's the only one that still has her cutie mark and retains memories from the past world. 
          
          -Luna says that their current world once had magic. Sunset Shimmer came from another realm, and made this world forget about it all 
          
          - Luna explains that Sunset needs Celestia's gem to finish her plan. This cutie mark gem is rumored to be hidden in the school, in order to have total control of this realm. Paired with the other 6, she'll be unstoppable. 
          
          - Luna tells the two that it's a war, now. The siz of them need to start using their cutie mark gems against Sunset
          
          - The six all hang out and have adventures in Pony Villa on their Heath's Break. They start to use their gems. They become closer friends (1/2 con)

PunsandPancakes

I haven't watched MLP since S5. But I'm bored and reading this was a glorious trip down memory lane. As I was reading I couldn't help but laugh. The heavy over writing, sometimes weird characterization, boring circumstances, and dragging of plot were only a couple sins I noted. I'm sorry for it, but also not at all sorry because the people who read it were so kind, enthusiastic, and supportive and it was a joy to write for you guys.
          
          So I present the following to anyone who cares: what follows of what I believe I wanted to happen...

PunsandPancakes

ATA is all edited. Those been slight revisions and corrections throughout. If you're getting bored waiting for an update, you might as well just read it all over again ;)

SimoneBlakely

@PunsandPancakes Yeah, I started reading ATA all over again. 
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Ashleychelsea123

This is like one of the mlp book on wattpad that actually makes sense
            
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SimoneBlakely

Still procrastinating with ATM? *Troll face*
          
          Jk. ;P
          
          But seriously, where's ATM? D'X

SimoneBlakely

@PunsandPancakes Plz tell me you're alive... O.O You ok?
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PunsandPancakes

ATA updated. BOOM. You welcome ;)

SimoneBlakely

@PunsandPancakes I understand perfectly! XD F-ing THUNDERLANE. :P
            
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            Yes you are. :3 Keep up the good - and confusing ;P - work! XD
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PunsandPancakes

@SimoneBlakely Ahaha, thanks! Now you understand my explanation earlier  I wrote in the hickie before knowing about your chapter and I didn't want to seem like a copy cat or anything. But I'm glad you enjoyed! 
            
            If it's confusing then I'm doing my part ;) ;) all will be revealed in due time
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SimoneBlakely

@PunsandPancakes Read it! Loved it! X3 RD has a hickey, lol. :P
            
            But wtf is w/ Flutters and RD's relationship? O.O It's so confusing. DX
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