Purple31189

Dang, it's really been a long time -w-;;;;

foxity_girl12

What do u think about it cringy stupid cool good???

foxity_girl12

@Purple31189 thx your great I'll use it thx again
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Purple31189

@foxity_boy12 i Think Its Good. The storyline is great, your explianation is also good. 
            Tip:
            If You are writing in third or first person try wish a little more descriptive so your reader has a more vivid imagination (have a better idea on whats going on) 
            You Dont have to use this tip, its your decsion
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