SomebodyCool

Hey friend! I would love if you gave me moderately harsh feedback on my stories… if you want you can just do a couple…or none… but I would really appreciate what ever you wanted to do! THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!!!

So, I've heard from TayTiger you're a good critique... I'm kinda freaked out right now talking to you, so cut me some slack if I sound like an ADHD kid on tylenol and Red Bull. I would really be in debt if you could give me some "average" pointers. I don't want you to fudge it up, but I do have feelings, sooo... Urgh, that sounded rude. Sorry. My book is called "Lions Eye" (I nailed that apostrophe pet-peeve XD) If I'm getting annoying, drop me in with MistyStormRose over there. Sorry Misty. v.v

Hi guys, I just found a really cool piece of writing by multiple authors, that I think everyone should check out. Author: taytiger (yes, I was trying to find TayTiger12) Story: Letters From A Victim
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@TayTiger12 Do you want feedback? Cos I can totally do that if you want.

what about me.... :'(

hi, I know you too