@PurpleRoseThorn22
Hello PurpleRoseThorn22,
Do you mind checking out my story "Things Girls Do"? It would mean a lot to me if you could read and leave feedback if you have the time to! x
Thank you,
KissedByTheSun
OK guys, so I'm in this young writers group. It's a bunch of teen writers and a college leader that get together once a week at our local coffee shop to discuss literature. Every week one person in the group submits a 5-15 page piece, then everyone brings it home, reads it, and edits it. The following week we discuss it. We talk about what worked, what didn't, and how to make it better. Last week I brought in the prologue and chapter one of 'Chase What Matters' SO, that means there will be some changes soon!!! Don't worry, they will be ALL good changes! It will be much longer, make more sense, and have waaaaay less spelling/grammar issues. Right now I'm doing minor editing. Fixing sentence structure, grammar, spelling, and some minor details. Throughout the next week or so will come the bigger changes. I'd love all of YOUR ideas and suggestions!!!! Now's the time to speak up! I'm fattening the story up, so I'll let you know when to reread it! Right after the major editing is over, I'll post the long awaited NEXT chapter!!! Exciting huh? I want your input!!
Ok, so I was thinking it's be cool to have a 'question/thought of the day' but I'm to busy to do that everyday. So, instead I'm going to do a "thought/question of the week" This week is just a test run, to see if you guys like it, or if it's terrible. So, here goes.
Why is it called SHIPment if it's on a car, and CARgo if it's on a ship?
@izzybelleraine Yeah! I sort of get it, the whole schizophrenic thing, but it's still sort of confusing. Then again, it just might be me. The other thing was that I didn't realize it was taking place in the civil war era until the wedding scene, but that's pretty minor.
I wrote a Harry potter fanfic: HARRY POTTER KILLERS: Aria is Harry Potters twin sister. She was given to Voldemort at birth, so Harry could live. Aria was raised by Voldemort, and fell in love with Draco. Aria and Draco are the heirs to Voldemorts throne. When Harry kills Voldemort, it is her mission to kill Harry.
Almost done with chapter 3 of Christopher Andrew! Hope to upload tonight or tomorrow. After that I'll start chapter 2 of Chase What Matters. Hopefully that will be up in the next day or two.
-PurpleRoseThorn22
@SnazzyReader Thanks sooo much! I'll update soon!
hey! thank you so much for telling me to read this, i loved it!!! i think i liked chase what matters a little more than christopher andrew, but i am excited for both of them!! update soon, you are an AMAZING writer!!!
@LiveLaughLoveMusicxX Thank you soo much!!!
@TheCookieMonster Thanks so much! I've spent over a year writing, rewriting, giving up, trying again, and just generally working on this book, so I'm really anxious to see if people like it. @smiling4you I haven't seen a purple rose either. I know they exist though. Haha! I thought it was a giraffe too!! But I had to change it. Thanks to both of you for your warm welcome! I can't wait for the feedback on my stories and getting the chance to read other people's!!