Purplepen138

Love never dies - vmin's short story 
          	Check out the first chapter 
          	https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/369795180/write/1449054227

VeiledNyx

Step into a world where desires are bought and sold, and every choice comes with an unexpected cost. In Chhaya Bazaar, a woman’s search for her lost dreams leads her to a haunting market ruled by the Soul Trader. Will she reclaim her past, or will she lose everything in the process?
          
          Prepare for a journey filled with mystery, temptation, and consequences that will linger long after the last page.
          
          A tale of sacrifice, ambition, and the price of longing.
          
          Are you ready to make your trade?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/389047770-the-soul-trader

wotamelonsugahx

Hello can u pls read and vote for my book? ' A royal's desire, A mafia's promise'

Purplepen138

@wotamelonsugahx yess sure I'll do so and can you also check out my story " Love between Families " and leave some votes and comments too love ya 
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IriYuto

@Purplepen138 Ofcourse! Just tell me what the story is about and I'll write one for you! Also, if you want I can even help you add better tags (you've used your character's names as tags which you don't do unless you're writing a fanfiction) so just gimme the tropes and VOILA, I'll make one for ya ;p

IriYuto

Hey, author, if you don't mind, should I give you some feedback? I just wanna advise you to have a description in your story. Stories without description are a HUGGGEEEE turn off for readers. Like I'm also really confused about what the story is and how it is going on. It's very unclear if the current relation of the protagonists is (Frenemies, enemies, good friends) No description makes the author look lazy and uninterested. You don't need a literary award winning description, it could literally be as simple as "Character A did this and that to Charecter B leading them to fall in love" 
          People just want to know what the story is about that's going to lead them to read it. So I suggest you add a description. No pressure or anything negative, just a suggestion from one author to another :p 
          And if you want, I can help you make a description ;)

Purplepen138

@IriYuto alright , it's tomorrow then
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Purplepen138

@IriYuto gurl i just forgot my insta id's pass so i'm gonna dm u from my another id and it's Purplehood138
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