Katie starr

@Zeno0925 don’t take it as a hate comment. I’m just giving you some changes you should make

@Purplepopcorn1 sorry but like your grammar is just-
          	  
          	  Hi guys, comment on my previous works please. It will help me write better stories forward. 
          	  
          	  Write it like that or sum. You write like your 8years old.