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@QTum2015  Thanks for the vote. What did you think of Chapter 12?

@QTum2015  It’ll all come to life in the next few seasons.

@TheMarineTitan42 It's pretty good but whoever kicked Andre out of his home was a right ass (and one I would love to see get their just deserts or a fate worst than death since it's most likely whatever Andre was banished for was blown out of proportion and the one partly, mostly, or mainly responsible for his suffering as of late and his dark ego tormenting him) from the small bit of context regarding his tragic past.
            
            Of course, Twilight, Rarity, and Applejack did notice some cracks in his demeanor with his dark ego continuing to egg him on (and I want to see that dark ego get its own ass kicked 'cause Andre was already suffering more than enough) but a part of me is also nagging at them for not being slow with him regarding his suffering and what he's been through.
            
            And, with Celestia and Luna still in the know about whatever was plaguing him, they're going to have to break the truth to him at some point, and the dam will have to break at some point. Andre can't hide from the help he needed to not only face his past but also confront and take out his dark ego and the one responsible for his banishment from his home.
            
            All in all, it's another good step in the story.

@QTum2015 Stay tuned.

@TheMarineTitan42 Honestly, I'm pretty surprised with what you've delivered.
            
            Something also tells me that Andre had a pretty rough previous life that resulted in this dark ego creep relentlessly trying to put him down and having a lot of self-esteem issues that stemmed from what caused him to be kicked out of wherever he originally came from.
            
            I know we've only just started but I have a sinking feeling something wild and out of whack is gonna go down with how much the dark ego had been tormenting him and the Mane 6 are already beginning to take notice along with Celestia and Luna. They're going to have to come clean with each other at some point 'cause something is going to HAVE to give should things come to a head.
            
            I could go on but I'm piqued to see where everything is going for Andre next in the story, especially since he has a long way to go to not only eliminate the dark ego from existence but also live up to his true potential as the Element of Valor while also confronting the demons of his past.