QaifiAlamgir

After a loooong Writers block I'm to Wattland, with this old short story i wrote last years December. And I still haven't written a word since February. 
          
          It's a surreal dystopian short story. I hope you'll enjoy (◡ ω ◡)
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/313758461

Ramadan Mubarak Everyone ( ◜‿◝ )

Hello~! Thanks for following! Sorry for the late notice, and have a good day/night~! ^^

Wattpad এ আমার প্রথম গল্প publish করলাম। আমি সচরাচর কাউকে আমার লেখা গল্প পড়তে দিই না। আমার সব গল্পের পাঠক আমি নিজে একা। তাই আমি জানি না আমার লেখা কেমন ─ ভালো, না মন্দ, না জঘন্য। 
          
          কেউ যদি গল্পটা পড়ে শেষ করেন তবে দয়া করে কমেন্টে কার অনুভূতি কেমন তা জানালে উপকৃত হবো। ভালো লাগলে বলবেন, খারাপ লাগলে আরো বেশি করে বলবেন, দরকার হলে গালি দিয়েন সমস্যা নেই। তবে জানাবেন অবশ্যই।
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/304293758?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=QaifiAlamgir&wp_originator=x78iFT2Li9gaK157LHGYqWU1ra%2BLj4OaRKmYPAsgEl8Oze%2Fdlkk0v92stUHAwaJfn25HY5M%2F%2FtRBCASRJhWqG7mUBbJQXrh5davb1%2F3ucW9X0eeg7g4ZvSjlgFTKzcSh

People who know me (or they think they know me) don't know that I'm a writer. No one in my family, none of my closest friends, no one. I usually write stories in my diaries, alone, in my room. After finishing stories I eventually forget about them and they get lost in oblivion.
          
          For this reason I don't get any feedback or review about my writing. I don't know if my writing style is good enough or not. That's why I decided to publish one of my stories in Wattpad, which of course took a lot of courage, and hard work. 
          
          so if you're into Light hearted Fantasy stories you might wanna check out this one. And I'm please, I request, if you finish reading the story, please give your precious opinion in the comments. Tell me how should I improve my writing style. How was the plot, the pacing, the worldbuilding ─ and if the characters were enjoyable or boring or anything else. I'm in much much need of constructive criticism (even straight insult would do, I won't mind). Maybe, then, I'll have enough courage to publish my other works in this platform. 
          
          Here's the story, if you're kind enough to spend your valuable time with this story, then with some more kindness please tell me how it was.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/304293758?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=QaifiAlamgir&wp_originator=4NQddouaQTXfmQjhIB3%2BbdVI7DFv5WvwokHS%2Fi2OuTAPfbPegtdSXnofH%2Ba%2Fsr3d6oa%2BiDNWivVXaS51Mc2PogetiQgOi9YohRJbKYbcfD%2Blh3r%2BFKlkgMC4Nz3XbzTA
          

So ─ finally, my first story is out. Now I've evolved from a "shy-diary-writer" to an official Wattpad Author.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/304293758