People who know me (or they think they know me) don't know that I'm a writer. No one in my family, none of my closest friends, no one. I usually write stories in my diaries, alone, in my room. After finishing stories I eventually forget about them and they get lost in oblivion.
For this reason I don't get any feedback or review about my writing. I don't know if my writing style is good enough or not. That's why I decided to publish one of my stories in Wattpad, which of course took a lot of courage, and hard work.
so if you're into Light hearted Fantasy stories you might wanna check out this one. And I'm please, I request, if you finish reading the story, please give your precious opinion in the comments. Tell me how should I improve my writing style. How was the plot, the pacing, the worldbuilding ─ and if the characters were enjoyable or boring or anything else. I'm in much much need of constructive criticism (even straight insult would do, I won't mind). Maybe, then, I'll have enough courage to publish my other works in this platform.
Here's the story, if you're kind enough to spend your valuable time with this story, then with some more kindness please tell me how it was.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/304293758?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=QaifiAlamgir&wp_originator=4NQddouaQTXfmQjhIB3%2BbdVI7DFv5WvwokHS%2Fi2OuTAPfbPegtdSXnofH%2Ba%2Fsr3d6oa%2BiDNWivVXaS51Mc2PogetiQgOi9YohRJbKYbcfD%2Blh3r%2BFKlkgMC4Nz3XbzTA