QuantumRaven

The new part of Rise of the Quantum Knights is ready to read!!! Finally!! Please let me know what you think!

QuantumRaven

I have a brand new part ready to post on my story, Rise of the Quantum Knights! I will be posting it tomorrow evening pacific time.  Here is a little teaser of the new part to come:  Malaghon’s breath shortens and his shoulders slump. He says, “But according to the law of my father, I can’t learn those skills from anyone except him. So it doesn’t matter what either of us want.”
          
          	Rykin stands up, dusting himself off. Gesturing to the mark, he says, “As I said, this is significant in ways you can’t yet understand.” After a long sigh, he tightens the ties of his shirt. “Look, I know this may seem difficult for you. But you’re just going to have to trust me, like you once did. If you really want answers, you’ll need to commit to what I have to offer. Because from where I stand, neither of us have a lot of options. You can keep wreaking havoc on sticks and logs, dreaming of living up to your father’s name… or you can take the chance to make those dreams real.”
          
          	As Rykin walks past him, Malaghon feels a tremble in his chest, his breath quickening as goosebumps shoot down his spine. He glances toward the ruins in the distance, uncertainty tightening in his gut. With a hesitant look, he turns back to Rykin and says, almost reluctantly, “When can we start?”
          
          	Turning back with a slight grin, Rykin says, “First thing tomorrow. I want to see you here every morning before the sun rises and before the fire falcons’ morning call. Be light on your feet—you know the forest well enough, so I shouldn’t hear you coming. And don’t be late.”
          
          	Scrunching his brow, Malaghon asks, “What happens if I’m late?”
          
          	Rykin glances away for a moment. “You won’t be. If you are, then maybe this isn’t as important to you as you say it is. So be here when I say—or your dreams will stay dreams.”

TrulyMaryJane

Hello, my friend! Just checking in on you, how are you?? <333

TrulyMaryJane

Wow that’s amazing!! Congrats to you, my friend :))
            
            I’m doing really great, thanks for asking!
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QuantumRaven

@TrulyMaryJane I'm doing good. I just gave my first five minute talk to the congregation I go to! 
            
            How about you? I hope all is well and good!
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QuantumRaven

So, my main story, Rise of the Quantum Knights, is undergoing revisions. What is already posted will be revisited and potentially revised for emotional clarity, relatibility, and areas that seem confusing or fall flat emotionally. 
          
          If you have any suggestions, please don't hesitate to comment either here or in the comment section in the story. Thank you so very much for all your support, my friends! Rock on and keep writing! = )