QueenBananas

Also I would love to hear some feed back from yall

Shiro_Keii

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Suggestions for mental apparitions:
          * Make the female lead stronger not in a badass way, but in a simple yet sassy is my way.
          *The female protagonist should still maintain her politeness but should stop taking shit from others.
          *She should work on her academic skills you know to secure her future for herself.*maybe as a criminal justice lawyer or a criminologist*
          *She should get over the jerk Tate and teach Robby a nice lesson and maybe make some cool friends.
          *See life in an optimistic view.

QueenBananas

Unfortunately I will no longer continue any of my old stories,as I wrote them when I had little knowledge of the real world or reality all together.I also realized the horrid slapdash  spelling and use of words lmao.Anyway I would like to thank everyone who has voted,liked,and commented on any of my horrible stories,I just no longer have the same mind set for these stories and have grown up very much and have much more life experience.However,I will be writing new stories in the future so look out to those.