heartstopperrfan_1

Hi, so I started reading your story about after Charlie's death, and I honestly couldn't get past the second page haha. Personally, I feel like it's way too sad, and people don't want to read about Nick without Charlie, the thought of that is too heartbreaking. This is my only feedback at the moment, but I will have a look at your other Nick and Charlie story soon :) 

QueenSavage0812

@heartstopperrfan_1 wellllllll in all fairness nick doesn’t totally not end up with Charlie…. But I do see ur point this story is truly heartbreaking and ik it’s not everyone’s cup of tea
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heartstopperrfan_1

@heartstopperrfan_1 yeah that's fair enough, I love getting my teeth into a meaty story, like the Bad Boy one I wrote, and with the one I'm writing now I wanted to really delve into Charlie's mental health. You can write something a bit darker, while keeping the same feel of heartstopper, which is what people enjoy. I'm not saying there's anything wrong with the storyline, I just think a lot less people will want to read something like that, because like I said, I had to stop on the second page because just the thought of Nick without Charlie is too heartbreaking haha 
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QueenSavage0812

@heartstopperrfan_1 thx for the feed back, when I started reading fan fics I saw similar stories of their happily ever after so i wanted to write something different but I totally get ur point of view
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