junopluto

Thanks for your critique! I try to proofread as best I can but I have terrible vision so mistakes happen often! I am not finished writing the story yet of course because it's going to have 24 chapters. But thank you for reading :)

junopluto

Hi it's Paige :) I am trash as well

junopluto

If you don't mind, could you give me some critiques on my stories? They're quite short, and I'll do the same for you if you'd like
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