@QuentinOverholt
Taking my story off for a while to rewrite it, hope you guys don't mind.
@Wil_Fenrir oh, is that a good or bad thing? Some of the events actually happened with I altered the names and added to twists to. Let me know if there is anything that I could fix to make my story better.
I would like some feed back on my book. To help make it better thank you!
