Querencia_Espoir

Hey, guys! 
          	
          	I wrote a new book and it's complete! 
          	
          	It's called Ten Letters To Jordan! 
          	
          	You guys have to check it out, I've been told it's good ;)

Kiwi_McLean

Hello, I hope you are doing well. If you have some time to spare do consider checking out my first book "Walls of Fire". It falls under the sub genre of sweet romance, i.e., a slow and steady burn kind of romance between two lovers. 
          
          https://my.w.tt/OCydEjJat7
          
          Do provide your honest opinions. Vote for the chapters if you enjoy reading it.
          Looking forward to hear back from you soon:)
          
          Thank you!!

Querencia_Espoir

@Kiwi_McLean
            
             I read the first chapter of your book, :) 
            
            I hope you don't mind me saying this but I think it's a bit...fast paced. Her husband cheats on her with her best friend, I'd be crushed (just my own opinion, I know not everyone would act the way I  would) if I had to find that out. Maybe do some editing on that chapter, like flashbacks of the fight and when she found out he was cheating. 
            The flashbacks can be when she's meeting the new guy or when she's boarding the plane.
            She could go into a whole monologue explaining why she was there.
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Querencia_Espoir

@Kiwi_McLean I will most definitely check out your book!
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