This was so well written, I loved it. I would consider one my favorites on this app.
In the beginning, with the Prologue, my hopes were very low for this book. So often when the MCs have sex as soon as the story starts it’s pretty much a downhill story after that. I was ecstatic to find this was not the case with this story, if anything it added to the spice of the MCs story.
The character development as well as the development of their relationship was written really well. It was the nuances and small details that many Writers often overlook that completely made this story work. Especially because this was a short novel there wasn’t a lot of external depth or layers to build on. As reader I didn’t even question the external factors that much throughout the story, that’s how insignificant it was to the plot. Truly bring out the writing talent.
Impressed with how the sex scenes were written - classy, tasteful, and juicy. That kept adding to the intimacy of MCs relationship.
I would have loved to have read more on the FMC being a bad@ss. Felt her bad@ssary could have built up more and she fell a little short in this area. This was a short novel thus not a lot of room to build on to showcase this aspect.
The overall consistency of the plot and storyline was wonderful. Editing was great, very few mishaps, making this an absolute joy to read.
I would definitely consider reading more from this Writer.
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