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Wolf Guardians #280 in Werewolf!

I found you though. 

Whaaaa you know mehhh ate cinco! hahaha ლ(⌒▽⌒ლ)

RESPECT

Will publish the next chapter when the reads will reach 400.

Hello! hahaha Jes elizalde here :) added na.

Hi! Yeah, I have read your story earlier, and you said I'd give some advice? 
          
          Well, you and your co-writer/co-editor write nicely, the grammar is correct, but there are some tenses that changed as the story progressed. It is one of my problems in one of my stories, the tenses change. 
          
          In a story, as what I have observed, you choose the way you write the story, and it was advised (from those books I have read regarding writing novels) that you stick to one tense. For example, you stick with past tense, and everything in your story goes in past tense. 
          
          That's the only thing I have noticed. So far, your story made me laugh, especially the part where he bluntly said that she was his soulmate. XD
          
          Bakit pala ako nag-english? Haha, sorry. :-) 

Hi! :-) Salamat sa pag-add ng dalawa kong story sa reading list mo! :-) ^_^ Sana magustuhan mo un. :3

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