QuirkyNina

Dose anyone know an editor that could help me?

Marie7882

You can email me the part you want edited, then I can send back suggestions.

QuirkyNina

@Marie7882 present
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Marie7882

Do you want to write in the present or past tense?
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QuirkyNina

@Marie7882 k, i will
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1000SkiesFullOfStars

Hey home fry, I saw you read some of my story (your comment made me smile) and I was wondering if you had any suggestions. I really want to improve my writing but you're the only one who has left a comment! :)

QuirkyNina

@1000SkiesFullOfStars BTW i loved ur intro.
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1000SkiesFullOfStars

I appreciate the input :) I plan on having a lot more dialogue later on when more characters are introduced.
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QuirkyNina

@1000SkiesFullOfStars  Every writer has their own style. I think the way you write is great, but i would suggest a little more dialouge. (You dont have to though, its just that its my type of style.)
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