Alchenda
I've started reading your book a while back on my mobile, which doesn't enable me to write a comment or vote. I decided to look you up on my pc, on which the above mentioned features and more can be accessed. I am very disappointed to see that the book is ongoing, as I have enjoyed every bit of it. Are you willing to continue? I think this has a lot of potential, and you are obviously a very brilliant author.
Quor000
@Alchenda Wow. Amazing. I'm very impressed by your analysis. You're clearly skilled at noticing subtle characteristics of the protagonists. You've given me a lot of motivation to make Part II an even more compelling, and complex story. Thanks!! You more than earned that dedication!
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Alchenda
@Quor000 I agree with you completely. You have taken a scientific approach to forming an opinion, and it is admirable. Each side, whether opposing or identical to your own, has its reasons and logic, and should be studied without prejudice (even though sometimes people's logic is questionable). I am a strong supporter of basing my beliefs and opinions on proof. It is difficult to say what I found 'most' interesting, as I was engrossed from the start and each character had their unique appeal. What I did love was Sam's personal growth. It appeared as though he saw himself through his students' eyes in the beginning: A delusional old man to be pitied and laughed at. Although he still appeared to lack self confidence in the end, he did find a source of strength within himself by trusting his instincts. He was able to distinguish reality from fantasy, even though what happened was almost magical, and that in itself showed promise of recovery from his PTSD. Dakota is lovely. Not only did she have to remain strong for herself, but she also seemed to have carried Stone emotionally through the loss of her legs. He depends a lot on her, and she handles the responsibility quite well. I do think she is less cheerful and unbroken than she appears to be, but the fact that she refuses to let her doubts show or control her future is a brilliant character trait in its own. I think you have pulled it off really well: She tries to be the best she can despite her circumstances, and thus be of more use than one would expect of a handicapped person. Thank you so much for the dedication, it was really unexpected. :D
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