R3D_D1RT

hey all
          	I've been thinking of changing the title of my third chapter 
          	
          	changing it from 
          	Himiko's Sanity
          	
          	changing it to
          	Himiko's Saviour
          	
          	tell me what do you think
          	
          	whether it's a good change or not

DekuMidoriyaXT_V2

So if I break the 4th wall then

R3D_D1RT

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@DekuMidoriyaXT_V2 
            
            Well that depends i know you are a badass at making really good reads so a little 4th wall breaking from you i dont mind but as long as it doesnt interact with the sub characters than it should be fine 
            
            Ie. Izuku is talking to uraraka and 4th break talks to author and uraraka asks izuku whos he talking to and izuku dismisses the q and moves 
            
            That type of 4th wall breaking shits me sideways its shit on so many levels
            
            So that was sub character interaction with 4th wall breaking 
            
            But 4th wall breaking that done way to much also shits me so if the book is so full of 4th wall breaks that you might aswell not make a chapter and call it a special cause the chapter without the breaks would quit literally be 2 paragraphs long if the breajing was taken out so too much is shit
            
            Where as just the perfect amount of 4th wall breaking done right is sometimes really cool or funny or sometimes really badass but it has to be done minimally and perfectly for it to be pulled off beautifully 
            
            P.s. sorry for the super long messege
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R3D_D1RT

hey all just gonna do an update to previous chapter of deku x harem
          I've read it in reader view and it was all mucked up so I'm re-posting once fixed to see if the reader view is then fixed as-well
          
          i'm also getting onto the 3rd chapter "so sorry for all of you who have been waiting for so long" and i will try to get it out as soon as i can

AbsurdRomancer

Thank Jesus you changed your books picture. It would've been banned for the explicit nature of It!

R3D_D1RT

None needed wasnt your fault
            
            So the book hasn't been taken down
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AbsurdRomancer

Oh..my apologies
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R3D_D1RT

Yeah but wattpad did takedown my cover so i had to remake it anyways 
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AbsurdRomancer

Thanks alot m8.

AbsurdRomancer

All I can say is that you should do what you think is right. Ask others for opinions, but never let them dictate it.
            RN, you should just do what you want.
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xFlameHD

I did not mean to at mention a specific person oops
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xFlameHD

They are walking together
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