MafiAlovEs<3

hi!  I just posted the prologue of a new Italian mafia story and would love some feedback on it — any thoughts would mean a lot!

Hey sorry to promote my novel here , but guys do give this book a try it won't disappoint.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/400460912?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=BABYELENOR

hi i luv ur work but i have a small problem my friend cant find ur book

https://www.wattpad.com/story/398101205?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=never_told37
          
          Hey, readers please come and have a look at this forbidden love story...:⁠-⁠)

Dear @R3ToxicLove
          
          I would like to kindly ask for your permission to translate your story into language, Polish,(My mafia love ) so that more readers in my country can experience and enjoy your amazing work. Of course, I will give you full credit as the original author.
          
          Please let me know if you would be open to this idea.
          
          Thank you for your time.
          
          Warm regards,
          
          @Chochlik_To_Ja

Hey everyone! 
          First of all, I’m really sorry for dropping this here without asking for permission—please forgive me if it’s not allowed.
          I just wanted to share my story with you all because I’d truly love your support and honest thoughts.
          
          If you enjoy forbidden desires, possessive glances, and a romance that pulls you into the shadows—please check out my story His Little Princess.
          

Sorry for the interruption! But if you have some extra time and want a story that's enjoyable regardless of age, please read my first book.
          
          (feel free to delete this author, salamat po!)
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/396018859?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=arainkwell

Hii! If any of you are interested in mafia romance with loads of drama, mystery, and unexpected turns, please check out my story!
             I’m a small author looking for reads and feedback on my new story.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/395053530-underworld-ties

https://www.wattpad.com/story/390057739?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=Darkgemini14

Hello, I would like to ask your permission to translate your novel "My Mafia Love" into Arabic. I hope you accept.